Cornered Short story Term 1

Cornered

Character Profiles

Name: John Bow	Name: Helen Withers
Job: Bar man	Job: Corner shop
Looks: Athletic, sharp face, brown hair	Looks: Brown hair, regular body type
Age: 20	Age: 23
Strengths: strong and street smart.	Strengths: straight forward talker.
Weaknesses: Not a great talker towards women.	Weaknesses: attracts the wrong attention.
Clothing: White shirt, black jeans, silver necklace, black boots and a hip chain.	Clothing: tight jeans, black T-shirt, checkered shirt and a pair of trainers

                                                                         


Helen Withers is a well known person with a lot of friends but not all are true friends that she trusts and likes.Her dad owns the shop she works in she has bean working for her dad for four years. Then one average day out of nowhere a man comes running in asking with all his heart "can you please hide me" a feeling she had she decided to help him he also said "Don't listen to them" so when two men big men came in asking if she had seen a man with a white shirt,black jeans,silver necklace black boots and a jean chain she said she has not seen anybody like that but I think I've seen a man with a white shirt go around the corner from here.

John Bow is a athletic barman but is also a drug runner for a local gang he has been doing drug runs since he was 17 but recently he has had some trouble with the gang and some recent disappearances  of money from the gang they think it is him but they are not shore if they want to take him out.He is on the run from being taken out from the gangs hitmen who have bean threatening him and bean following him waiting for the right moment to take him out. In a non-public area.

After Helen got rid of the hitmen from her shop she got John out of his hiding place asked him what he did and what she got herself into for helping him he said a bit about what he did but he didn't share every detail mainly to do that the disappearance of the money was actually him.He actually had the money hidden in a secret location he took the money so he could pay to get out of the country and start a new life but he can't get out of town without being seen by a member of the gang they own nearly all the businesses in the town that is including the shop that Helen's dad owns.She is still not shore to trust him or not but for know she will trust him.

Pitch 25 Words: A fast paced drama showing the struggle of chose between two strangers hiding from a vicious gang hunting them down nonstop around every corner.

Genre: action drama.

Main location: Is a corner shop its pretty run down but more or less your normal corner shop.

The feeling of my film representation picture:

Here is a example of what I think the hitmen should look like.

Screen Writing Short Project

Red and white

Priest	University Professor
Name: Samuel Maxwell	Name: Sarah White
Gender: Male	Gender: Female
Age: 25	Age: 35
Date of Birth:	Date of Birth:
Strengths: Organized, Faithful church member,	Strengths: Independent,
Weaknesses: Shy	Weaknesses: Heavy drinker, Constant family issues,

 

The Meet

Why they be meeting

The meeting is by chance and was not organized by the 2 individuals.

Goal, Conflict and change in the idea

Goal

The original for both the priest and the University professor was to head home via train. They end up at the same train station and the priest notices the professor at the train station for the first time and notes the fact that she is upset. His goal slightly deviates from heading straight home and attempts to approach the professor despite his shy nature when meeting new people.

Conflict

The priest would then proceed to ask her about her emotional trauma in which she would at first hesitate to reveal her worries and become slightly defensive and partly aggressive but then relaxes and comment on the fact of having to meet her parents who she doesn't share good relations due to her problematic past.

Change

The priest then begins to comfort the professor and encouraging her to meet her parents. After being slowly reassured and comforted the professor calms down and realizes that her parents only wanted what was best for their daughter in which she has opposing opinions with. After the professor and the priest part ways, the priest then begins to change from a shy and close minded nature to a more open with his thoughts and more approachable with the surrounding populace.

A few Quick thoughts

I've bean getting to know everybody and who they are where they come from its nice seeing new faces and learning new things the thing I am looking forward to the most is learning TV and Film in my new university lets see how it goes.

Here is my summer project: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TjHRBJXZw40

Thank you